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Apr 20, 2008 | 2:03 PM EDT
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thanks for the reviews so far, they're helpful for the next paper stuff i do.




Rated 4 / 5 stars

not bad

I love the detail put into the closeups and some of the backgrounds (like the clouds). That really made the flash stand out for me. However, I wish there were more frames so the whole thing was a little smoother. Keep it up.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

well, I'll be honest

No that bad but not that good either...I had trouble identifying the storyline...and the choppyness was a little more excessive than it should be. good job though.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


Its artowrk its original and awesome, but it demosntrates no particular FLASH knowledge. for example no preloader.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Very nice.

Very catchy song, and a nice piece of animation.

But due ther is STOP / PLAY buttons, and it got stuck a few times in the middle, i'll give it a 8.
Its very good, never the less.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

That was amazing...

Just the sheer amount of effort and time you must have put into that just amazes me.

The only thing I will say is that, with drawing, people are always judging your artwork, and in many cases the entire flash will only look as good as the weakest drawing. Originality managed to make up for some of the less spectacular (still good, but just not astounding) drawings, and this might be something to look out for next time - a drawn flash won't be as innovative next time, and so you really are going to have to pull some amazing shit out the bag to top this one.

Good luck with that, though,


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