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A short thing I made in school, a bit rushed and it shows- but I had fun with some of the shots and was happy to be working on paper.
I love the detail put into the closeups and some of the backgrounds (like the clouds). That really made the flash stand out for me. However, I wish there were more frames so the whole thing was a little smoother. Keep it up.
well, I'll be honest
No that bad but not that good either...I had trouble identifying the storyline...and the choppyness was a little more excessive than it should be. good job though.
Its artowrk its original and awesome, but it demosntrates no particular FLASH knowledge. for example no preloader.
Very catchy song, and a nice piece of animation.
But due ther is STOP / PLAY buttons, and it got stuck a few times in the middle, i'll give it a 8.
Its very good, never the less.
That was amazing...
Just the sheer amount of effort and time you must have put into that just amazes me.
The only thing I will say is that, with drawing, people are always judging your artwork, and in many cases the entire flash will only look as good as the weakest drawing. Originality managed to make up for some of the less spectacular (still good, but just not astounding) drawings, and this might be something to look out for next time - a drawn flash won't be as innovative next time, and so you really are going to have to pull some amazing shit out the bag to top this one.
Good luck with that, though,
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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