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Apr 20, 2008 | 2:03 PM EDT
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thanks for the reviews so far, they're helpful for the next paper stuff i do.




Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


the only thing bad about it at all was the music.
it reminded me of my frined thomas who is really bad at singing


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

My other one was too short.

Way too jumpy for my taste. The art was good, but nothing new or spectacular to me. I would recommend a different way of doing animation if you're gonna stick with shorts for newgrounds.

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


Hollowsong, are you just mad because you never got the frontpage? I dont see you putting out any animations like this so dont dis it, and the song is his personal style. If you dont consider it great keep that to yourself. Anyway great job on the video dude, i like how you drew the lightning best of all. 9/10

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Rated 3 / 5 stars

the song, the song?

Please tell me the author?
But nice animation. Yes, preloader would be good..


Rated 2 / 5 stars


Hurray. You made an animation out of paper and pen. It's called a cartoon; and a terrible one at that. You might as well have just thrown a bunch of different half-drawn doodles together and played them in no particular order. Oh wait, that's what you did. There are like... 3-4 frames per scene. Unacceptable. Not to mention the music was downright abysmal.