Score: 10

"the idea's great"

by: j55593

date: January 14, 2009

i know its hard to draw great in flash, but the scene 2 are not showed how u drawed it, well, great job, it took alot of time to draw a flash, i know, cause we are newbies, lol

Score: 8

"Very Cute"

by: Pataki

date: April 20, 2008

It Was A Different Idea, I Liked The Music, You Could Probably Make It Into Something Really Awesome :o
:D

Score: 3

"an amateur's experimentation"

by: MacGuges

date: April 20, 2008

I appreciate that the author is searching for new techniques in Flash. That's great! However, this movie taken on its own is not so great. That's ok, but I don't know if this has a place on NewGrounds.

I noticed a bug in the first scene when I returned by the link at the end. The car's lines were back!

I didn't like that the second scene was over so fast. The first scene was kinda interesting as it lasted several seconds while you watched it being drawn, but the second scene which has so much more detail is done in fraction of the time, before the whole image had a chance to register. Perhaps you could have waited for the user to click before moving on.

I noticed that for the two links at the end, only the pixels forming the letters were clickable. You're not the only one who's done this, but it's an annoying practice. At least the font wasn't narrow in this case. Like the links in web browsers, links in flash should work for a rectangular zone enclosing the text.

Try telling a story in your next flash.

Score: 7

"I love scene drawers!"

by: StayingSain

date: April 20, 2008

All I can say is that if you made the lines a little smoother in animation I believe that it would be alot better. I still love these though.