Score: 5
"well"
date: April 20, 2008
i can tell youve worked on it, so i gave it a 5 to try and help it through judgment :)
crits:
the voices were way to quiet, i couldnt really hear anything that was said :(
ciggerettes dont go that way round in an ash try lol, the light end goes into the glass bit :D
gfx could do with being touched up a tad, things like the sticks limbs being all wobbly, it doesnt take long to go back and smooth these things over, but it makes them look a lot neater :)
fingers crossed for you though, hope it gets through :D
October 3, 2008
Author's Response:
The cigarette is just meant to be sitting there... like its going to be picked back up. But yeah... I see your point. Overall this wasn't very thought out. I was just feeling the animation mojo so decided to put something together. I promise when I do another animation it'll be nice and smooth. I just haven't worked out the best way to animate yet. To tween or not to tween that is the question. lol.
