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Apr 20, 2008 | 11:00 AM EDT

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Ok this is a random stickman animation I did a little while back. Probably won't work on it anymore... it seems hard to go back to something once you've left it for a while. I hope it shows up ok beacause my .swf files are doing something werid on my computer. Enjoy... This is my first submission... so please be nice... Oh the music is created from audio loops from Adobe Audition... I did it myself.

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lewisMlewisM

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

well

i can tell youve worked on it, so i gave it a 5 to try and help it through judgment :)

crits:

the voices were way to quiet, i couldnt really hear anything that was said :(
ciggerettes dont go that way round in an ash try lol, the light end goes into the glass bit :D
gfx could do with being touched up a tad, things like the sticks limbs being all wobbly, it doesnt take long to go back and smooth these things over, but it makes them look a lot neater :)

fingers crossed for you though, hope it gets through :D


DarkRayneRules responds:

The cigarette is just meant to be sitting there... like its going to be picked back up. But yeah... I see your point. Overall this wasn't very thought out. I was just feeling the animation mojo so decided to put something together. I promise when I do another animation it'll be nice and smooth. I just haven't worked out the best way to animate yet. To tween or not to tween that is the question. lol.


StayingSainStayingSain

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Really didn't understand it.

The shading was done nicely, but the plot was a little confusing, all I remember is hammers and cigarettes.


DarkRayneRules responds:

Well it wasn't really well planned out so yeah not much plot going on.