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Eulogy For: Jebus Owns The Mouse
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This submission was BLAMMED by our users.
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
04/19/08 – 05/25/08
THIS HAS NOT BEEN STOLEN I WAS INSPIRED BY 2 FLASHES
BATTLE PARK 3 (blood stays on bg)
AND ANOTHER FLASH(I forgot the name lol)
I AM STILL VERY MUCH A BEGINNER
IN MADNESS
98 frames of goodness
its supposed to be short
PLEASE REVIEW
I RESPOND TO ALL
CREDIT:
ME
Nggangsterpimp
Krinkels
EDIT:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHNOOOOOOO O ITS DIEING
Nggangsterpimp made the sound pack with the sounds i used
EDIT:
Longer Animation
185 frames of pure animation goodness
18 fps
EDIT:
Added A Mute Button
EDIT:
It might take a sec 2 load the movie
So u might have to look at a white screen
was it Animator vs. Animation
need to make looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonger
Although it would end up being a copy of animator vs. animation anyways...
would have ben better in a game
It was okay, but the music was irritating, and it was a bad adaptation of an overused concept.
put more time into it. way to short looks like you cut and pasted all pics
What can I say about this. The concept was amusing but it was a very poor delivery. One the music was very low quality which grated on the nerves and forced me to turn off the speakers in the short time I watched this. For the graphics you had poor image quality as well, maybe increase the size so that you wont have to squeeze everything into that small face and it wont be so fuzzy. Also you might want to add a little more than what you had, it seemed pretty bland, and if it is that short at least give it an ending that doesn't make people tilt their head to the side and go "huh?"
jebus. lolz. its like animator vs animation. but a little different.
your funny!!!!
nice smooth animation. sine its on co author list ima have 2 vote 5 on it everyday now. ;)
Funny ! Loool he got shot in the middle of the movie but not died =P
The guy below me is a right dik , anyway nice flash , wasnt that good but amazing for a beginer .
Cool but i think u need to spend some more time and slow it down. He was like on the ground and then he popped up, nice try though...
It was short, random, not funny, and so on.
Use more blood, and have like an "animation vs. animator" thing.
Or you can continue....
you need to get better at frame by frame, dont just nick madness sprites. Also the animation was jerky and annoying
It was OKAY, but still I agree with the asshole FLASHSTEALER, It does need more frames
P.S. don't vote 5 on your animations everyday if you want turd of the week
"I'm giving this a 10 Cause toxicdevil93 is my Bud!"
Nice! XD
it was choppy it had low fps it doesnt have the madness fell its a rip off of animator vs animation the blood is off the backround sucked it was to short it had no action at all the mouse was fake as hell and your a 10 yr old. damn i think i got everything.
no slay or anything.... but this was crap.
whoa
98 frames of goodness? i vote zero on this piece of shit
its good 2 see tht u managed 2 get hold of madness spirites. and ur improvin animation. jus take ur time more, next and got the frames and fps to perfection and keep practicin on and u'll get the hang of it is all i gotta say.
but 4 this deserves a 9:)
nice
constructive criticism:
1. I know you made it in an hour, but it couldve been a bit longer
2. adding Hank would have been AWESOME
3. MOAR VIOLENCE!!!
4. good job on the original madness soundtrack (glad you didnt use something else)
that is all.
ANOTHA GREAT MOVIE!
But next time get da blood betta, BUT IT ROCKED LULZ
that fucking SUCKED
Ok then, here it comes.
First off, music. God fuck damn, that song is overused nearly dayly. It's honestly pretty shitty, and I never got what attracted... well, everyone to it i nthe first place. Basically, I'm saying, don't use Mc5 music, or in that case, ANY cheshyre music. Of course, if you havea good reason, or can't find anything else that fits, sure, go ahead. No one's stopping you there.
The drawing is next. Honestly, there isn't much you drew here, but still, what actually did, sucked majorly. Go search for a few art tutorials, or don't lay your fat face down on the table during art class.
Next off, the animation. Good lord, it really WAS terrible. Honestly, if I could, I'd find a way you break it to you easier, but this is one of those movies where it's so bad, saying it straightforward is the only way. None of the movements were fluid, they were just gaps. If you wanted to make it fluid, you have to animate more together, not far apart. You also have no sense of any physics. You know, gravity, equal/opposite reactions, reactions in general, etc etc. No movements were anywhere normal, OR madness. And since you animated in huge fucking gaps, gravity and anything to that extent is/was impossible to do. Reactions and
stuff, yeah no. These also don't work out because of your gaps.
This thing a a trainwreck, and I don't suggest you even try madness animation again for a LONG TIME until you can learn everything needed to make a good animation. Practice and try to find a tutor (someone who's actually GOOD, not a friend that barely knows, if not less, than you do)
let me post it up again, i deleted due to Newgrounds icon management
I know this is your first movie...... I'm going to vote 5 and rate 9 so you could work harder...
Hope you improved
This is just bad, the art is terrible, the blood doesn't nearly match with the gunshots, it's just about... 6 frames and a few motion tweens, there is no point, and no other skill/effort put into this, you can't spell constructive (Boberty's Reply), you don't understand sarcasm (Drift's Reply), you can't cook, you obviously don't understand what collaberative means, but best of all, you're just terrible at flash (I saw the little screenshot on your profile) and to the person below me, giving people good ratings for horrible animations to "get them to do better" doesn't actually make them "do better" because then they think they can get by on crap... 0/0 Rating
much better than other animations, and btw
STeeLRaTnl, you cannot argue about something that cannot be defended, your animations sucks, sorry, but its the truth, and dont say that i cannot post my opinion because i dont have a flash submited here, it does not change the fact that you suck
It just wasnt very good.
Movement was choppy, and jebus looked like one whole symbol when he moved.
On another note, Steelratnl is right.
He DID post this up before.
I saw it.
Anyway, spend more time on your animations and make it WAY longer.
185 frames is... well, a bit... short.
5/10
3/5
-xXSnowBladeXx
I did this to your other friend to and it only seems right to do it to you to. First of all this video was really bad. Secondly stop cussing because it makes you sound like a complete idiot. And if your going to cuss at me dont block me because i will gladly reply to any cuss filled messages you send me and tell you how much of an idiot you are. 50 bucks says your going to send me another cuss filled message. (p.s. to all those other than the maker of this video dont mind me. I would send him a message normaly but the coward blocked me.)
good for a beginner but who am i kidding im a beginner il give you a good rating for a good movie as a beginner but try a bit harder and make the film longer good luck
idk man 1st of all
the idea is quite stolen
plus i saw ur review of the originala and the only difference was the mac
and he shot like twice instead of once
personally i dont believe it a very good idea anyway
sorry