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Unfinished movie.

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timeslyr

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Date Submitted

04/17/2008 | 07:52PM EST

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Current Score

1.75 / 5.00

Score Rank: #125,005
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Just seeing whether or not its worth finishing this project. Just seeking opinions.

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Average Score: 4.6 / 10

Score: 7
dailyderek

"Sorry But I don't Gets It"

date: April 17, 2008

I don't understand the plot. Please don't ignore this comment can you please respond to it and explain the story? It seems like a really cool movie but 'm not getting it. I thought this guy was suiciding then a truck hit a girl then he sworded the truck driver. Then another truck came and blew up an then there was aflashback or something and he turned evil or something and the same thing happened all over (possibly a loop0 I'm not sure I understand the movie but it seems like it could go somewhere if the art improved a bit. The animation was fairly edgey and could use some work but it was great for a beginner. (I'm a beginner too) Unlike the guy a few below my review however I thought the music was awsome for this vid. Fix a few problems like the ones I said and DO make the full movie. Oh yeas and please tell me the plot it seems so cool but it's soo confusiling.
Anyways that's my constructive critisizm or whatever it's called. It overall seems like it could turn out to be a freaking sweet movie.

-dailyderek

April 19, 2008

Author's Response:

The plot within this movie is that the main character used to be an average guy, but he lost it all. He use to be part of an organization that protected a sacred sword, but someone managed to corner him, threatning to kill his girl(the one you saw in the sunset scene.) By drawing the sword he became extremely corrupt to the the point that he became nearly a god. But the sword itself had other plans for him and it divided into three swords entirely. Creation, destruction, and time(nobody knows what happened to it). The wielder of these separate swords become part of the swords themselves. As for the main character of my flash, his sword is destruction. After the sword got divided into three, he was sent to the future by the sword of time. But there is a drawback to his sword, he feels all the pain that is inflicted or will be inflicted, which is why he saved the girl. He sees future pain in his dreams so when he cried at the beginning it was kind of like a reiteration/ foreshadowing of what the girl would go through/ dying. But all he's searching is for a way to redeem himself and his sword while it may be helping him is also destroying him. His eyes are white and his skin has turned gray, but while he's not completely part of the sword yet. If he was my character would be evil/ demonic destroyer so the sword still hasn't taken too much yet. There's a hand that still remains untainted from the swords consumption, the hand he wielded the sword as a combined whole. So his soul still remains within his hand, yet over time loosing himself slowly to the dark destructive sword. I'll try to make this stuff as clear as I can on my next one. I've already changed the song to a metallic song and another problem I saw with my work was that the sound was off when I transferred it, not when i had it in my computer so I'll have to fix that too.

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Score: 3
Kflame

"was there a story there?"

by: Kflame
date: April 17, 2008

The art was pretty bad and although it was called the unfinished movie you couldve at least put on "THE END".

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Score: 5
treaver4695

"It's alright."

date: April 17, 2008

I think it's pretty good. It just needs to have improved art for the walking and everything else, mainly more smooth animation, and a different song would work with this more than the song you used.

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Score: 2
Jacobdm0

"bad attempt"

date: April 17, 2008

This looks like a bad attempt for a music video.
Improve the graphics...a lot. and make it relevant to the song.

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Score: 1
KillerEmcee

"Back to the drawing board for you."

date: April 17, 2008

This movie could be really great, but you really need to improve the art style (possibly a song change). Also the animation could improve. I liked where the story was going and I personally would like to see where you were going with it. Or just throw out the story altogether, just make it look good.

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