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I'm not sure how this will do.

This is not meant to be a masterpiece. It's just a short little flash that I made when I was bored. Please take this into consideration. And if you're going to leave a review, don't just go 'boring' and leave it at that. Tell me why. Because this is certainly not going to appeal to everybody.

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Not bad.

I've seen a lot of these on Newgrounds lately or at least a lot of them have been coming in through the review request club. I saw a couple of errors every now and then where it looked like one of the black boxes were out of place or it looked like something wasn't lined up the right way. Those could have been cleaned up a little bit to make it better. Also, the length of the submission is what really got me I guess. It should have been much longer and you should have drawn out different patterns with the blocks. Any pictures that you could have made would have probably been a great thing to do. At the end, THE END didn't really show up as great as it should have been. Perhaps the use of smaller squares would have given you enough room to space it out properly. Maybe you could have added a couple of other backgrounds and colors, without overdoing it and making it one of those flashing color/light submissions, which will put someone into a seizure. Anyway, probably deserves around a 6 or a 7, but since I just gave you an 8 on two spam submissions, which I found humorous, I will instead give you a 9 for effort. You should come back and try this again sometime.

Sidorio responds:

Ouch, I nearly hit my head on that wall of text.

Too short

I think that while you've shown aptitude for this sort of thing, you really need to focus your attentions on it, so that the idea can be allowed to flourish. With the current tirade of submissions from yourself being spam, you do tend to give a wrong impression about the quality of the flash.

Personally, I can't say much wrong about it, although, the diversion toward the swastika in the one phase, plus the overall length of the piece being a little on the short side could both do with attending to.

[Review Request Club]

Sidorio responds:

Five? Gosh, you make me ashamed to be an Englishman.

I love you

Your wit in answering reviews is great, as was the submission. I'm voting 5 because I've not seen moving squares before and think that moving squares are better than SLICED HAM. Which is good

Sidorio responds:

Oh fuck. You've jinxed it and now I can't think of something awesome to say.

PS:
Sliced ham is evil. Eating a pigs guts is animal cruelty and it's wrong that they should...

You've really messed it up. I can't even finish some bullshit irrelevent conversation about ham and how funny it is to kick animals. You evil person.

Interesting

It was cool, but no revolutionary animation whatsoever, and a bit short (Although you did say it wasn't intended to be a masterpiece), but a nice little concept.

3/5

Sidorio responds:

3.5/5 actually, if you want to be fussy and look at the review score.

Tetrahydrocannabinol?

I like at the end, how you wrote THC CNO. I just don't know what secrets you're keeping from me. I'm not a narc eh.

No but really, that was a nice bit of Flash. The music suited the animation.
Thanks for your submission.

Sidorio responds:

THE END

Credits & Info

Views
5,074
Votes
11
Score
2.63 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 17, 2008
9:11 AM EDT
Genre
Experimental
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