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I made this for a friend and he said it was funny so i posted it to see what NG thinks :D
By the way this is a repost i fixed the buttons up.
Animation needs work. Audio = awesome.
Seriously dude, it was some nice material, you just need to smooth it out is all. Give the animation a lot more time. And im not just talking about the bike, you dont want to overlap stuff, its distracting. Organize ur main menu. It was sweet tho!
I'm gonna be nice
Ok. It wasn't "OH SNAP!! LET'S FRONT PAGE THIS RIGHT AWAY MOTHER FUCKER!!" but it wasn't that bad either. The voice acting was clear, but it lacked everthing. It was monotone. And trust me that's not good. I made some movies with monotone voice acting and everyone told me that's what a BIG problem was. As for the graphics, they were decent. They again weren't "OH MY GAWD!!" crap your pants awesome graphics. But I could tell what everything was, and the animation moved smoothly. So this review may sound really weird when you read it so to conclude things I'm just gonna say, keep working and soon you'll have your stuff on the front page. So good job.
No point to it.
This movie clip is just plain dumb. I don't see the point in it other than a waste of my time in watching it.
maby if you opened your eyes and you could see the point to it,
its a how to video .....
Could use some work
Your audio was great. The art work, not so much. If you actually animate this it will be great.
I don't know if the voice was PURPOSELY supposed to be stupid sounding but it was GREAT. That kid sounds really special.
the voice was spos to sound stupid and fast :D
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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