Score: 4

"Funny idea, but..."

by: Ransom09

date: August 17, 2008

This type of joke doesn't work as a stand-alone Flash. It's something that would be joked about in a longer cartoon.

Onto Flash work, I didn't like the fact that you used dynamic text. It made the text selectable (annoying), it gives the text a choppy look, and makes certain sentences cut off where your text box cut off. Even if you didn't switch to static text, you can make dynamic text non-selectable in the properties, and you can either extend the box horizontally or change its mode to "multiline" to solve the cut-off problem. If you're programming the sentences in with the flattery as a variable, "\n" creates a line break.

Aside from the text, the looping is a big problem; it not only makes the background music overlap, but it makes you as an author look either extremely unknowledgable in Flash, or extremely lazy with your Flash.

On a lighter note, I loved the background music.

Score: 7

"It sure flattered me!"

by: FatSunny

date: April 16, 2008

Well this is simply proof that people don't need that much talent to make a funny flash cartoon, it's very simple, and I have to say, it doesn't take that much effort, but that doesn't matter, it is what it is, funny scrolling text, and it's humorious, lucky for you, there wasn't any typos, or else it would completely ruin it. But good job, simple and funny :P

Score: 10

"this is ok"

by: MuzzaBear

date: April 16, 2008

it can help emo's lol

but im gonna give ya a 10 wat the hec

Score: 6

"keep this around"

by: faceshed

date: April 16, 2008

it would be nice to have this around to send to people in need of yes men but I'm sorry you will probly be blamed to death because it has no blood or sex

Score: 4

"ok just not good enough"

by: gamergod1995

date: April 16, 2008

Wonderful needs an R. Yours looks like "Wondeful". One of the sentences are cut off. Looks like ten minutes of work. Loops. Background is boring. Not long.

Point: this should be blammed.