Score: 8

"good start"

by: shadowchaotailsevil3

date: May 6, 2008

Although its only a 3D demo project ts still pretty nice

Considering the amount of time these take to make it could go pretty fun if you keep doing it right

Have fun

Score: 3

"Hmm, pretty good"

by: blackcat2000

date: May 2, 2008

The artwork is pretty nice, and the animation is pretty smooth, but the 24 frame one jerks a little when it eh... is facing my left. I think. Whatever, it's still a little jerky. As I said, the art is pretty nice, but this wouldn't be too helpful for a "real" animation. If your going to use these to animate, I would suggest animation say:
Minigun
MinigunFiring
MinigunStopping
MinigunRecoil
MinigunBullet
After which, you can combine them (those were suggestions. I don't draw guns in detail, or I haven't yet, so those were off the top of my head) to create things in your animation if necessary. Also, in future, I'd suggest not submitting tests? Thanks, and once again, decent work.

Score: 3

"Smooth and Well made"

by: Aracid

date: May 1, 2008

Those are very nice models, I don't spot any flaws within the animation nor within the models themselves. However You didn't show much to this. It doesn't keep your audience interested. I do have a suggestion though for 'displaying' these if you're going to continue. It would probably even look nicer to your audience if you took all of your short animation displays and put them into one flash, like a porfolio with a neat set up and cover design.

Score: 2

"Hmmm"

by: Shanus

date: April 27, 2008

A bit lack lustre, surprised it even got threw the portal.

The animation was good, actually it looked excellent, you've got some talent there. Bit worried about the file size though need to work on your compression a bit.

Well there was nothing else really, what you had there was good, just a waste of a submission, would like to see what your movie will look like that you're using them in though, I look forward to it

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Score: 3

"Good models but not entertaining."

by: Bezman

date: April 27, 2008

Well, these models look fine. They'd look great in a 3D animation of this quality.

I assume the ribbons leading into the miniguns is meant to be a roll of bullets? Modelling some bulletes on that would make a big difference.

I also noticed to ugly white spots appearing in the front of the guns on the rotating turret, where there shouldn't have really been any. Only a small issue though.

Essentially, this all looks good but I can't give a high score because it's not entertaining to me.

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