Score: 7

"Interesting enough :)"

by: Malachism

date: April 15, 2008

what it didn't have in one made up for in another. ok graphics but it made up with a funny ploy of what all guys hate and would love to do shoot there ex and give them the revenge they deserve. Your parachute was really good I liked it, the plane should have exploded and even though it kinda reminded me of how a dart hits the dartboard and just sits there. the drawn paintball gun was very well drawn and I'm not into stick figures much but you definetly caught my interest :)

Score: 4

"Not bad"

by: GeForce

date: April 15, 2008

This was not bad for a beginner.
But u could have made it more like a animation.
but still great for an nuub.
Keep working and it will get better

Score: 5

"Not bad for a start..."

by: James-Leeper

date: April 15, 2008

...i guess, some of the designs were okay. You need some more sounds and maybe a background music. You can find free music in the audio portal ;)

Wat people look for in movies are:

Graphics: 5/10
Sound: 6/10 (As a sound mixer i thought they were there in the accurate timing)

Plot: 8/10 (You did have a story line which does make a gd movie)
Humor: 3/10 (People do like it when flash movies are funny)

But overall 5/10 stars. Keep working hard, and you will go far. ;)

James Leeper

Score: 8

"hahaha!"

by: meehanus

date: April 15, 2008

i wanna shoot all my exes! fun a little short, wanted more abuse ha, keep trying your great!

Score: 9

"Can't help it!"

by: Co1980

date: April 15, 2008

Sorry, but I cannot agree with you: I think this is a pretty darn cool submission and the lack of background doesn't bother me at all!

The main strength is that your man Lulham keeps smiling whatever happens, even while flying his aircraft into a mountain. And rather than ending up all gory, he simply ejects way too late. This kind of humour is definitely awesome IMHO.

The last part turns gory again, which is actually quite a pity. I think most gore on NG replaces well-thought out plots. If you're making another episode, I would recommend using a silly plot or situation as a basis and regarding the addition of any gore as optional ;-)

I think you did a great job!