Score: 9

"Very nice!"

by: addictedtoflash

date: May 22, 2008

The only problem with this flash is that your walking noises and the walking animations are off, and it is very noticable. Other than that this is a great flash and I can't wait for the next one ^.^ !

P.S. What collection are you aiming for? If you tell me I will recomend it for that collection. Keep up the fantastic work on all of your series!

Score: 8

"Nice"

by: Moemoe52

date: May 3, 2008

Is there going to be anymore of these? If so that would be great, nice little love Story.

Score: 6

"A step in the right direction."

by: OdHero

date: April 18, 2008

It is good to see you take on a flash like this, this is your first non sprite flash, but even better is that it is frame by frame, a great change of pace.

Notice that this has communicated a much better story than any of your sprite flashes? Thats because fbf allows that, and it is good to see you try your waters in fbf because very few spriters do so.

Your sound editing was much better than your other flashes.

You still have improvements to make, your backgrounds are good (better than mine) but still ned to be practiced. The character design could be improved, it was kind of odd to have this white haired spiky haired guy with just a boring bald guy and girl with normal brown hair. That could use work.

I take you much more seriously now that you have tried this. Do not worry about the Newgrounds score, it is much easier to get high scores with sprites, to begin with, but as you improve, that will change.

Good luck!

Score: 10

"fantastic"

by: Pille

date: April 16, 2008

good work, that a really good animation
oh, and the protagonist is looks like soma of castlevania aria/dawn of sorrow

Score: 6

"shows potential!"

by: lenkobiscuit

date: April 16, 2008

nice changing of angles and general telling of the story. it was kinda inconsistent though - some of it looked really nice and stylized (the guy chopping the baddie's head off) and some of it looked a bit dodgy (the imported photo of the castle).

I think what bugged me the most was the main character's design - he had this sole strand of hair sticking out from his head and it looked really silly for a serious flash. maybe it would have looked better slicked back or something.

but either way, it shows promise! Jazza's early stuff was very much like this, and look where he is now.

hope this helps

-lenko