Score: 1

"Bad, needs lots of work."

by: absent

date: July 18, 2005

Graphics: Quite bad and not worked on very hard. The water in the shower looked like blinking dots and the character's faces could have been worked on a lot. Your animation was choppy and poor which also needs to be helped.
Style: I know you were trying to make a nice story for this movie, it's just that the spelling errors take away from what you're reading
Sound: I couldn't tell what the people were saying, so I guess I can't give you many points.
Overall: Not a good job. You need to spend more time and make it look less sloppy.

Score: 2

"kinda sad..."

by: lollyman

date: December 29, 2003

Well something with a little moral attached to it hit NG...

Work on the graphics and well everything else
this makes me want to cry...

Score: 0

"Gay"

by: scalenewarrior

date: September 14, 2003

Gay

Score: 0

"this sucks"

by: x-ProAnim-x

date: March 10, 2003

oh man do better crap..... i mean Graphics

Score: 1

"bad spelin loozs credabilitee"

by: dentsinger

date: February 20, 2003

I thought this was possibly a human interest piece with a factual basis. The somber mood set by the music and the "matter of fact" way the story is presented in text. This worked for it aside from the spelling errors.

Also, you can't assume the reading speed of everyone, so add an interactive button to progress to the next frame or scene when there's only text to read.

The graphics aren't stylized enough to look original, which so many contributors on this site fall into. It's obviously easy to draw circles and squares. Spend some more time working out your characters and draw them by hand.

Maybe it was in good taste that Joey's rape in the shower was only assumed to have happened and not graphically represented.

As far as reviewers go, I would say a huge majority of those here on NG are pre-teens with a desire to just have SOMETHING to post, so they post some quick crap and go shit on everyone else's work. There are some really good artists to be found here on NG, but you're right...everyone deserves a chance and a mature critique.

If you're serious about animating, keep it up.