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This is my first flash animation which I made for a class project and decided to share it.
this is pretty good for a first. and good job throwin he doors in the end.
not bad for a first try
for you're first try it wasnt bad but there was one obviouse problem. the animation was good but the ideas been used alot. i was going to give you a 7 but the doors tell me otherwise. 8/10 4/5
It was a good first try.
I've seen worse. But the voices are too soft.
Graphics were pretty good, considering some other flash animations, but one problem i got was that the voice audio came on way before the guy started speaking. Overall it was a good attempt.
Well it wasn't very funny... actually seemed kinda like a rip off of the Hitchhikers guide to the galaxy yellow fish.
this flash wasn't too interesting... the idea wasn't really that original (can you say babel fish) but the best part of the flash by far wasn't the animation, it was the voice acting. it showed some promise, and while it could definitely still use some work, it stood out compared to the animation.
but high, squeaky voices are a no no! just a friendly reminder.
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