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SPOILER ALERT!
due to the fact that the audio isn't very good, and many ppl didn't understand the characters, I'm posting the dialogues.
Caveman: munch-munch
Kid: Dad!
C: What?
K: I don't like granma.
C: Ok, just eat your potatoes.
Dude: Whazzup?
Caveman: Good.
C: I have to get one of these cellphones one day.
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At last I managed to finish this one!
Some words about the movie:
This is my FIRST flash submission to NGs and my FIRST animation EVER! So please be fair and give me your comments, remarks.
This is a pilot episode for a series i'm thinking of continuing if i get good feedback, or bad if only they are with helpful remarks.
The series will consist of short episodes that follow the life of a caveman (homo erectus species).
I know that at the second part the audio is horrible, but I rushed it to finish it. Also the I tried to lip-sync but it's not perfect because it's an embedded video on flash and the sound isn't perfectly synchronized w/ the video.
I hope to solve all these on my next submission.
PLEASE leave a review!
Peace!
M.
Good start!
For your first flash, this is very good. I liked the animation style, it's pretty unique, however the quality of the video brought it down a notch. One thing you really need to work on is the sound quality. I couldn't understand what was being said because the music was too overpowering, and there was too much white noise. Work on that and I'm sure your flashes will improve greatly!
Both of these issues are because I used many different programs for this one (flash, anime studio, sketchbook, imovie) and tried to combine them. These wont be an issue to my next submission as I'm now working on a single prog.
Anyway thanks for checking and reviewing!
Daaaaamn...
dude for your first flash ever that was awesome as all hell!!!
Kudos man. 5r, 10/10
Thanks very much!!!!
so so
animation was good but i didnt relly get it
dude
great animation and a really good concept
especially for a first ng post
all you need to do is figure out how to get better sound quality
i couldnt understand anything that they were saying
music selection was cool too
good luck, man keep on posting!
Thanks a lot! I'll definitely post more.
lol! @ this!
I thought this was very funny.
You should make some longer episodes.
Thanks man! Did you manage to hear the dialogues? Coz I'm getting complaints about that. Glad you liked it!