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Submitted: 04/12/2008 | 04:43AM EST

File Info: Movie | 5.9 MB | Add Movie to Favorites

Current Score: 3.18 / 5.00

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Watsup people, this is my first submission, was a 1st year MultiMedia Design project for a short flash animation inluding a character we created and developed. He is Xander Fox, out to battle androids. My only flaw (a big one, i might add) is that i have 0 skill in drawing, and i hope the end result was satisfactory.

Crtitisism appreciated, athough i know the drawing and design needs work.

Thanks!

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Feedback is awesome and much appreciated! Thanx guys, will definetly note and keep those in mind :)

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Average Score: 7.6 / 10

Score: 9
inkypinkyponky

"excellent 1st try!"

date: April 16, 2008

wow not bad 4 your 1st try!!!
u certainly have potential.
dont worry 2much about your drawing skills, it will improve with experiance,
just look at beavis n butthead...crap drawing but great content.
i like the war of the worlds type ending...clever.
look 4ward 2 more posts.
good one!

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Score: 9
legendaryshiled

"good job"

date: April 12, 2008

the only thing i didnt like was the ending but overall great job!

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Score: 8
whispyy

"great attempt"

date: April 12, 2008

nice effort...we can see that u have some potential....keep at it

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Score: 7
FlyingCC

"Giveing it a 7"

date: April 12, 2008

Easy to see there is talent in your design. A bit sketchy on the animation, some sound was a bit off and the ending was odd. Over all though I liked it, good idea, good work and keep it up.

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Score: 7
Rob-Herring

"not bad!"

date: April 12, 2008

Not bad at all, especially for a first time. Just touch up on your drawing and it be badass. Also, maybe change the timing for the music, like in the beginning, because it didn't quite work in the beginning when he woke up. Otherwise a solid flash

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