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This is an alternative ending to my previous animation : "A Better Fishing Spot"
04/11/08 Update : I've tweaked up many details and changed the last scene... so it should have a better flow...
29/11/11 Update : Added a "Play" button and tweaked the ending... again.
i didnt see that coming.. haha
ha! very unexpected!!!
I was like WTF!!! That was retarded and super funny!!! I like how relaxed and calm was everything, suddenly there's a giant robot out of nowhere and kaboom!!! ha!!! Very nice ending!!!
hahah... my head is filled with those ideas... glad you liked it.
It was ok...
The gag was god but you held the establishing shot and other shots for too long making the beginning boring and leaving me to wonder if anything was going to happen. It would have also been nice to have the robot thing completely in the shot as opposed to being cut in half by the edge of the screen.
I've took your advice...and changed the end a bit...and shortened the first shots... turned out better.
it was pretty funny.
heheh thanks for the review... :)
I didn't really care for it too much.
It could've been played out a little better.
Yeah I agree... I worked on it a little and reuploaded it...
The Intro is kinda shorter... and the last scene is played out differently...
but if you didn't like the random gag in the end... it is basically the same...
Thanks for the review
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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