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my first completed flash ever
good but somethings need some work
ok there was plenty of action so i will give you that. Animation wise, lets just say it was lacking ability. if that makes any sense. so what i am trying to say is that most of the animation was good, it was clean, and some good art work. but most of the time it looke choppy and kinda bad. dont take that in a negative way i was just saying to work on that. but Overall Great Job on your first movie. if you ever make a 2nd one of this. just work on the animation some more. oh and the music was good too=)
Sometimes it's too fast where it should be going slower so that we can follow it, sometimes it's too slow where absolutely nothing's happening. More sound effects would have helped as well.
A good flash all in all but the continuity was a bit off. The peasant didn't look like a peasant, the gaurds didn't look like gaurds, and the technology was scrambled with the time period (I mean, an energy weapon wielding peasant in a castle slaughtering plainclothes gaurds...really?). The concept was still very good and the animation was great...6/10 and a 4/5 (I really do like the concept,even if it is cliché but it needs polishing)
P.S.: Lightsabers!?! Way too cliché!!!
how did he get all that stuff? unexplained. and in general, the movie has poor quality,, and im not jus referring to the visual part. if you get my point. I really dont think the idea has that great of potential anyway. try again.
Altho some graphs were a bit weird drawn i liked it overal. By the way, who is the artist of the song (or the remix version by the sound of it)? Keep it up and if the graphs get better u can easily get a higher score :)
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