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EDIT> Far out, I was just gunning for front page again, but I didn't imagine a trophy! Thanks to all who voted postive ^.^
EDIT> Okay NOW I think I have it sussed. Wish someone could have told me browser animations dropped 6 fps.
You'll probably want to watch Part 1 before watching this; obviously...the link is...somewhere.
Sorry for the long load, I ended up cramming a lot into this animation, the extended 10mg upload helped that happen too thankfully
Hope you enjoy it anyway, my drawing and animating skills have definitely improved along with lip synching as well, so it shouldn't blind anyone this time.
we've seen this before...
The timing isnät very good, and with timing, i mean the timing of things that happen (animation and sound, the jokes aren't well timed etc.). This along with the crap sound (VA did ok, but the audio overall, music, sfx etc.) takes this down alot. The drawings are ok, but the animation isn't good at all.
The humour... nah, we've seen this so many times before... "so, do you come here often"... i mean, it just ain't fun.
Even though you mention that the lip-sync have been fixed, it still looks halfassed.
You've made a serious attempt into making a decent flash though, and put some work behind it, so it ain't total shit, but it ain't my cup of tea.
"The lip sync should be "Better" though". I know it's broken in areas, but if you thought it was half assed now then you would have thought it was quarter or fifth assed on the version I had up before.
Thanks for the review anyway.
... Kind of a hateful review ...
I'm sorry, but this flash kind of dissapointed me. I was expecting more to come out of it. The lip syncing was, at certain times, completely off, and the stories never really "connected". On the other hand, I do like the way the art was created. But, I believe thats the only positive thing I can say about this flash.
Your jokes were not really that funny.
Animation was not good.
Sound was off-sync.
Get your timing better, and this might work out; but for now, I'm gonna have to give you a 4.
liked the art
but the writing..., yawn.
also, the lipsync was comparable to a 70's kung fu flick.
i didnt really find this funny, it had really childish humor and by that i dont mean immature humor, i mean if i had watched this maybe 2 or 3 years ago i would have found this pretty funny but it just wasnt sorry. also the lip-syncing had some bugs in it. but ill have to give u points for the animation.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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