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EDIT> Far out, I was just gunning for front page again, but I didn't imagine a trophy! Thanks to all who voted postive ^.^
EDIT> Okay NOW I think I have it sussed. Wish someone could have told me browser animations dropped 6 fps.
You'll probably want to watch Part 1 before watching this; obviously...the link is...somewhere.
Sorry for the long load, I ended up cramming a lot into this animation, the extended 10mg upload helped that happen too thankfully
Hope you enjoy it anyway, my drawing and animating skills have definitely improved along with lip synching as well, so it shouldn't blind anyone this time.
its ok it could be better but i like the music too so yeah 6/10
double-you tee eff?
Although it wasn't something people would want to watch over and over like the pros of Newgrounds, but something that I wouldn't say is a total waste of time watching. Animation wasn't great, the audio was off fairly often, and the humor was slow most of the time. Write a script and give it to people who have played the game (make sure they are people who can't take your ideas) and revise the plans for animating it (such as showing movment instead of still-frame bouncing around). Once again was not something people should watch more than once, but certainly not a waste of life points.
Nice Flash - Humor
The flash was rather good, need to fix some of the timing with the voice.
Didn't really laugh until the end. So, find something funny to say next time.
I watched part 1 first, as you said...
...and found it lacking, just like part 2. Somehow, it just doesn't manage to be interesting. The lip sync is indeed better but still off at most times, and not animating simple things like walking and such just doesn't do it.
Maybe with some more time you can perfect the lip sync, do some better voices and start working on more animations of the characters?
You have improved indeed, but I think that with a little more time you can do even better.
I personally think that youhave some fantastic potential as an animator, the characters all looked great and all of the sets were excelent, however you just need to do some work on your lip syncing, and perhaps work on making the charaters movements more realistic. Other than that I felt that it was great and would have gotten a 10 if it wasn't for those two qualities, which sadly are the most important, the jokes were fine in my opinion and I did laugh at a couple of them.
Don't let these other reviews put you downthey just focuson the bad and cannot find anything good in the animation
Keep on practising and make some more!
A short film about a park bench
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