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EDIT> Far out, I was just gunning for front page again, but I didn't imagine a trophy! Thanks to all who voted postive ^.^
EDIT> Okay NOW I think I have it sussed. Wish someone could have told me browser animations dropped 6 fps.
You'll probably want to watch Part 1 before watching this; obviously...the link is...somewhere.
Sorry for the long load, I ended up cramming a lot into this animation, the extended 10mg upload helped that happen too thankfully
Hope you enjoy it anyway, my drawing and animating skills have definitely improved along with lip synching as well, so it shouldn't blind anyone this time.
I personally think that youhave some fantastic potential as an animator, the characters all looked great and all of the sets were excelent, however you just need to do some work on your lip syncing, and perhaps work on making the charaters movements more realistic. Other than that I felt that it was great and would have gotten a 10 if it wasn't for those two qualities, which sadly are the most important, the jokes were fine in my opinion and I did laugh at a couple of them.
Don't let these other reviews put you downthey just focuson the bad and cannot find anything good in the animation
Keep on practising and make some more!
the storys funny but i gave you a 8 because the sound was lagging and the movie coud not keep up preety good thou.
I like it!!!!
i really like it
the animations were really good!, and the jill voice was parfect!
also the humor is great!
but you need to improve the ronald mcdonald animation
beside`s that is was really good ^.^
......well....you have good animations and all, but there are too many negs behind everything. The lip syncing really needs work, they kinda hop instead of walk, and everything was sort of goofy(not haha goffy, wtf goofy). this can all be fixed though and I hope to see something more improved come from you.
lipsyncs need work
lypsyncs need work but everything ells was done fairly good. some of the jokes may be a little lame but the movie is not bad. it is long which actully helps since the movie was entertaining.
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