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Necropost courtesy of the random video portal. I feel as though this video has a number of good elements and sets an appropriate atmosphere. The real limitation is its length, which didn't allow for much story or suspense.

It wasn't too bad...

If you refine your techniques and improve the ambiance of future works by keeping a slightly more consistent style between foreground and background then I'm confident you could generate some really high-quality works.

wtf that was freeky

that was quiet good but way to creepy and random for me (to random for me :O omg)

Not Bad.

Perhaps you could add voices for next time. That would make it even better. Other than that, it was pretty suspenseful. I'm sure that is what you were shooting for anyways.

Interesting.

You´ve been really close to make a really disturbing short. It has been a good idea using impressionist pictures as backgrounds, that works really good. Some things don´t really work as well, some FBF animations are poorly executed (especially the blinking of the eyes) and break the eerie setting. I was also surprised about the filesize, maybe you could have compressed the sound without losing much quality.
I liked it. You´re on the right lane of making scary pieces of animation. Just make some tweaks, and study more that David Lynch, Jan Svankjamer and Salad Fingers flicks.

kringle88 responds:

yeah the MP3 i attached was a few mb i though Macromedia would automatically compress it. I was mainly influenced by David Firth his animations are twisted but sometimes he goese to far E.g The Milkman, Toast Boy. But at the same time Burnt face man is hilarious.

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