Score: 10

"great"

by: silverking19128

date: June 17, 2008

animation was amazing, colors were perfect. very nice, very nice indeed.

Score: 8

"1 min of great animation"

by: llams28

date: April 8, 2008

Good:
-Song > I enjoyed the music which is 1/2 the battle with a music video type flash
-Animation > Everything was well drawn and easy to follow. (some other flashes can be cluttered)
-Variety > The flash kept doing new things, there was no repetition in the visuals.

Bad:
-Length > I understand that this is meant to be an ID for SA (whatever that is) but for Newgrounds, it was incomplete.
-Continuity > There were pretty big leaps in the animations. Like when she was standing there and then suddenly falling and then suddenly in the water. It would be an improvement to show how she fell, how she entered the water, etc.

Overall:
Like my sumary said, the minute of animation that was there was great. It really is a shame that you didn't animate the entire song. Also, you can tell a bit more of a story by filling in those blanks in the action and that would be another improvement.

4/5

Score: 9

"Ugh..."

by: NedGreen

date: April 7, 2008

The flash is cool but I hate stuff like this...
too mushy

Score: 7

"Like A Dating Profile Flash"

by: giantanvil

date: April 7, 2008

While this shows a better range of subject matter and much greater thematic unity than most submissions, it also abruptly turns into a glorified personal ad. The overall effect is somewhat bizarre - is this humor? Is it social commentary on the responses a female artist tends to garner on the internet? Is it in earnest? Perhaps it's some combination of the above, but the viewer is left guessing.

Midori's artwork is well-suited to capturing emotion and movement. For some, the stylized "sketchpad" drawings may ultimately give an unfinished feel to the product.

Score: 9

"hey... wait a minute!"

by: Dylawrence

date: April 7, 2008

didn't you just submit that boogie one, like, yesterday¿
speedyness aside, you are a damn good animator... is that from practice, or are you taking some bitchen classes