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Tired of not being taken seriously, Larry embarks on a quest to slay a legendary dragon.
Total Runtime: 4:12
[Edit] This is the first of a six part series. We've already written scripts for the first series and production for episode 2 has started.
Not fun at all....
That was not funny... Not funny at all my mouth didn't move a single time only this one time when i yawned but thats beside the point! The animation was great but i mean come on... I didn't laugh a single time. Get a new voice actor or put more enthusiasm into your voice!
"Where's the enthusiasm?"
I think I can explain why people are feeling this. This is addressed to Sephor Rud:
You seem to be a good voice actor, the problem is instead of coming up with 'voices' for different characters, you're only coming up with 'pitches'. Main character is a medium pitch, that tough Knight is a low pitch etcetera
There's nothing really WRONG with doing that, but it means you have to keep Larry's voice at a constant pitch or it isn't Larry's voice anymore. When he's whining, I want to hear him go high - when he's angry, I want to hear him go low. At the moment he kind of pushes forward at almost monotone. It makes for very lack lustre listening.
I recommend coming up with some distinctive voices, even if you keep Larry's the same. Then when you're recording the voices, makes sure you do it when everyone else is out so you don't try and restrain yourself, really go nuts with it - experiment with many different ways of saying lines.
As for the actual style, I thought it was beautifully presented. I've never really liked the line tool, but it doesn't bother me here. The backgrounds are beautiful, you've managed to come up with something that is fun to look at without taking attention away from where's it's needed.
I love Larry's design. Now if only you could make a few more characters that match him.
That was, eh....
Not funny at all. It almost sounds like the voice actors are mumbling. Where's the enthusiasm? Where's the charisma? And the jokes were very lame. And no fight scenes?
i liked it
i liked the story and the art, it waspretty funny, more funny stuff and youll get a 10
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!
More to come from Larry!
Funny, Larry is cute ^_^ and his donkey is too, funny stuff!
Ha ha, thanks!
Glad you enjoyed it!
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