Score: 6
"rating - 6"
date: April 10, 2008
It does have some good motion graphics, and I think it's pretty cool, but I'll give you some more little 'edits' if you need them:
-Make it a little longer, people like things that can take up some of their time.
-Make it have a purpose, not just random killing, or you'll lose ppl :)
-If you'd like, and if your capable, make a game out of it! I'd love to play a game like that! Take some tutorials, add some of your own, ask some good game designers, do whatever you want.
--SchoolPark reviews
April 17, 2008
Author's Response:
thanks for the constructive criticism schoolpark
