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Beach Assault

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Apr 3, 2008 | 11:50 PM EDT

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My first flash I ever made. This is made frame by frame. My brother and I came up with this idea to make the Merc Commandos a group of mercenaries that fight the "Gihads". I put a lot of time and effort into this, so I hope you like it.

Update: Thank you everyone for the feedback!

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shootoutredarmyshootoutredarmy

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not bad

I liked it better at the beggining but its really not bad. It could have been longer though.



LastditchplanLastditchplan

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not half bad!

I was rather impressed by this little first timer, not a bad plot, decent animation, and overall a nice concept and always good to see some fresh bodies entering newgrounds with at least some ideas and real potential, way to go! For next time if your looking for tips to improve, firstly SOUND!!! This would have been a lot better if you picked a good song to match your sounds effects which were very clear and crisp, second maybe quicker pace if your going to do something like the 5 or so gunshots at the end, after the first 2 I was rather bored, and finally maybe some dialogue? Always a plus to have voice acting (if done well that is!) and the obivious improving of flash, but that takes time of course, other then that nice work, and hope to see more good stuff from yourself!


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Gunner63 responds:

I see what your saying about the gun thing. I didn't really see that when I was making it. Thanks for your feedback! I will give the voice thing a try.


colombia14colombia14

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

alright

it was alright the animation was good and the gun sound effects. if this is your first flash i cant wait until you make your next one.


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getto89getto89

Rated 4 / 5 stars

good job

no diologe made it intresting like a silent film till you heard guns shots but it was a good movie. next time add a little more of a story


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