ummmm...
that was way too short. If you had mand it longer with more plot it would have been better. Also, whats with the NG tank in the back?
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Yeah, so i was working on this, with my friend and i decided to upload it to newgrounds, could you please give me some constructive criticism if you dont like it.
crap
No stars
try again dude
it needs work if it as your first ther omfg i cant mkae flash some perty good man
crap
this movie sucked they just started fighting and it didnt end
Cool.
So I was checking my music when I realized you used my song in your game. So I am watching it now...
It was very short, but I could tell you were just experimenting. Keep it up!
