Score: 8

"Great"

by: Shanus

date: May 12, 2008

Good and quite better/different than it's sequel.

I really liked the artsy type graphics in this movie, they seemed to flow alot better. And the techniques you used were quite the bit more inpressive too.

The music kept stopping for me, this may have been my machine but it was quite off putting, but from what I heard the qudio track was well picked, suited the movie completely. Great choice.

Overall a great frame by frame, well deserving of it's score :D

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Score: 8

"Grovy!"

by: Cyberdevil

date: May 9, 2008

Another nice experimental piece of flash! Good graphics, good movement, good everything, it all flows together nicely, keep it going!

-cd-

Score: 7

"Sweet"

by: Viridis

date: May 8, 2008

I like these kinds of animations, and this one in my opinion was cool, i liked the whole splurging of colours, not just black and white. Also i lvoed the whole stop start thing it had going and the fast pace.

Graphically the doodles and things were cool, nicely done and some looked better than others but they were all pretty good. the animtion was smooth throughout as well.
Nice music behind the whole thing too. Went well with the speed of the falsh.

Overall this was cool, make more and keep up the good work!

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Score: 8

"Better"

by: Hemlok

date: May 7, 2008

I personally thought this one was better then the other. The animation was great, it seemed to flow together with the song very well. I also thought the use of colors in this flash was great. The song you used was good, but I have the same problem with the other one when it comes to length. You should have either made more frames to last through the whole song, or you should have found another good song to put this animation with. Other than the length this was another good flash. Keep it up!

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Score: 7

"Needs more"

by: Coop83

date: May 7, 2008

I hope that this project ahs shown you how you need to draw more frames to slow the animation down and smooth it out a bit. The way you were with some parts of the animation, it moved far too fast for my liking. This is where frame-by-frame animation gets tedious, I'm afraid.

When the world turned into a gumball, I'm not sure that you really needed to tell us that it was a gumball, before it was bitten. Maybe make it so that the jaw clamps around it, chews it for a while, then blows a bubble, for instance.

Still, you've gone some way to learing the skills that you need, I'd reccomend that you work on making a definative plotline for these things, just to keep it all in perspective.

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