ugh
It is okay, needs alot of ploish though.
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hi everyone i have started this one but have decided to have it on a ship in this part in the next he will enter the ship and kill the captain or will he???
song is hunting high and low by stovarious and sonata arctica i know this one is short but its gonna be a four parter okay ......p.s. SONATA ARCTICA KICK ASS and anyone who doesnt think so well i am not gonna talk about it.... >-< lolface
update i need voice actors for part 2 and 3 and 4 so pm me if you wanna try out!! k
protip: reset the music..
..or at least make sure it doesn't start again when the loop is allready playing.
Sonata Arctice aint that good, epsecially not when played in canon.
As for the actual movie... meh. I'll wait with the starts untill I see all 4 parts.
It's a start
Just a heads up, it is in your viewers best interest to make sure that they can read everything you write, no matter how nifty it is to animate it all in flash :P
more blood
It needs blood. That would make it a lot better. But its pretty good the way is.
good series so far
the series looks to be shaping up, the figures at the end were a good touch aswell.
one downside, the text at the beginning is too fast to read, slow it down a little
redrhyn0 responds:
no worries i will type and slow all text in the next part okay i may need a voice actor for khalim and the captain okay so pm me if you wanna try out