Score: 6
"Okay"
date: October 19, 2009
The way you approached the actionscripting was okay, as was the concept, however you really need to fully grasp the game engine before you make a tutorial. There was no sound, terrible death animation which needed a few more frames, difficult ammo system, and your artwork wasn't top notch.
However, it isn't too bad and much better then most I have seen. I suggest you could redo this, adding in a recoil animation the gun, upping your artwork, sounds, maybe add some level designs and take your time making the tutorial.
3/5, keep it up though!