wtf?
too short, change the voices(remove the high piched ones), add more things to it then it would be better.
you should shoot for about 1:30 min and it did seem alittle childish
add diffrent areas and add a plot!
Author Comments
Hello Newgrounds
This is only my second flash on Newgrounds,and about the 25th ive ever made...
Its longer than my last one, aka the slap,and I think is animated better,too.
Bloodspill234 responds:
well considering that i was like 11 when i made this... yes, it did seem rather childish
lol
pretty good lol. Just make a longer one with other stuff happening.
Bloodspill234 responds:
agreed.
Eh...
Very short, the music was very out of place, maybe have them fight each other next time. Try using different sounds instead of squeaking for the stick people.
Bloodspill234 responds:
Thanks for the feed back!
its ok
nothing to new the concept is good i would just like to see a longer one
Bloodspill234 responds:
I will take your advice into consideration
Ummm...
This was really short, really random, and really strange. The animation seemed alright though :) but Maybe have them have more of an "objective" next time ;)
Bloodspill234 responds:
yeah haha