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This is only my second flash on Newgrounds,and about the 25th ive ever made...
Its longer than my last one, aka the slap,and I think is animated better,too.
You can make it longer you know and its kinda boring because its to short... How do you make a Movie Anyway?
too short, change the voices(remove the high piched ones), add more things to it then it would be better.
you should shoot for about 1:30 min and it did seem alittle childish
add diffrent areas and add a plot!
well considering that i was like 11 when i made this... yes, it did seem rather childish
pretty good lol. Just make a longer one with other stuff happening.
Very short, the music was very out of place, maybe have them fight each other next time. Try using different sounds instead of squeaking for the stick people.
Thanks for the feed back!
nothing to new the concept is good i would just like to see a longer one
I will take your advice into consideration
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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