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The story of a man with a true heart, and compassion; that most don't understand. Please enjoy, and comment. I will comment back on some responses.
when did you get Flash? I'm not religious, as you know, and I don't like how you put words in God. You don't know what he would say or think. While I don't like the topic necesarily, I won't take points for that. I think Jesus would be offended of this. I'll be fair with my rating though. There was almost no animation. I could have done that in a few hours. Just tweened fades and a picture really, with that sprite icon that you probablly did not make either. The voice quality was astounicing. was it custom or did you find a clip of it. Either way the sound was increadible. And it was really boring... Even if I was a christian I'd be bored of this quickly.
Advice: If you want to convert and save people which is what I think you weer doing... right? Make it entertaining. Like make a cool religious series or game or something.
More animation. You could make it a cartoon of jesus. insteed of a pic. Even if it was a loop of jesus walking. It would not be that hard. And finally I think you have great flash potential but should work on more than this kind of stuff. see ya later Karmastrike.
God as Madison Avenue sees him
Manipulative, mawkish and thoroughly American. 10 points for presentation - 9 points for no soul = 1. Jesus would have hated it.
this may not be newgrounds material, but it was sure nice thanx
i thought the naration was excellant, but if u used more pics and more motion in the piece it would that much more amazing.
I didn't realise it was God speaking at first, but then it came to me...
Everything was great except the song reminded me of Christmas, which made me a little TOO sad LoL. But anyways, thank you for the flash none the less, and Happy Easter!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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