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a random doodle of the abstract thoughts that came to my mind... you really can't imagine the way the thoughts float in your mind..
What's there is good, just not much there.
Needs sound badly! It's neat, but needs more.
Thanx a lot... i know it's raw and all. i did this to test my new tablet. my friends saw it and said i should upload it. I hadn't tweaked it or anything. I am really blown by the response cos, this i too admit is very very raw. But now i'm inspired. Thanx guys. I need all the suggestions and hints.
heres my thoughts, one it needs sound, two more pictures and abstractness thrown in instead of the nonstopping loop of the same 4-5 pictures, three i definately agree that this shows quite a bit of the mind thoughts. So overall good flash, i definately think though you got the potential to do better.
Thanx... As i said, this was just a trial. you are really sweet. that was a huge compliment.
Keep it up
This is pretty nicely put together, though very short.
Add color and music to emphasize on certain aspects of the piece.
I have to disagree with lazyguy69 when he said you needed a plot, you had a plot, it was the stream of consciousness.
I have to say I envy you for your skill in fbf. Good work, keep it up and dont let negative reviews get you down. Learn from them and keep going. =]
Thanx dude... it was a real booster.. thanx for sticking to me.. you are really sweet... this was just a try... there's nothing to envy in me, i'm just a beginner.
The art was ok, but I WANT SOUND!!!!!!! The trippy picture and some 60s psychodelic music would kick ass!
thanx.. the thought of uploading this work was just out of the blue.. actually didnt get time to tweak it..
Not too bad
I enjoyed this because it is exactly what you said. It's like a stream of consciousness, one idea flowing directly into the next. You have some talent for the frame by frame style, and I really liked how one image transitioned into the next. If it was longer and had some fitting music, it would really be a sight to see. Don't let bad reviews get you down. Continue to improve your craft.
Thanx dude, i'll really try to make it it longer with music and all for my next attempt.. thanx for the support.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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