Score: 2
"Eh."
date: March 20, 2008
Has the potential to be good, but there are quite a few things you should improve on.
First of all, it needs to be way longer. What you have now sort of explains the storyline, but you need to add characters, perhaps voices, and more action. There needs to be more animated scenes, not just a few tweened and blurred pictures with a few animations thrown in.
You might want to add music, too. You should add sound effects, although music might not be as good as just background noise like you had. Other than those things, it was okay, but there isn't enough.