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Pretty neat

Need some better female voice actors the male voices seemed 10x more serious than compared to the females in this, which made it kind of annoying.

Ninja Battles

I must say I`m impresed, but then again the voice acting was pretty weak. Anyway keep up the good work and try to make it less Naruto like kay ^^

Me gusto mucho tu flash xd, pero

Bueno, primero que todo, felicitarte, acabo de ver XM 1.5 y me gusto mucho como iba la historia, aparte de tu gran mejora en tu estilo y animacion. Segundo, volviendo al tema, el flash en si estubo bien, algunas partes mejores que otras, pero no me gustaron varias cosas:

1- los VA, intenta conseguir mejores, el unico realmente convincente era el Assa Cross que realmente parecia profesional, me gusto caleta su voz.

2-la musica de fondo, onda, intenta pensar en temas mas instrumentales sin letra, ya que en la batalla del assa contra el assa cross el momento se arruino totalmente con la cancion de rhapsody.

3- El dialogo. Nose porque pero a veces me parecia que muchas cosas estaban demas, por ejemplo, la conversacion sobre la inmunidad al veneno del assa, o la "broma" que el mage le hace a la priest. Intenta apegarte a la historia que quieres mostrar para mantener la atencion del que ve el flash y que no se aburra en ningun momento.

PD: Perdon si no me exprese bien en alguna idea, pero ya son las 3 am y me da lata revisar lo que escribi D:

PD2: saludos desde chile xd

4/5 8/10

Better

So you added Chrono Cross music; that's a plus. Also, the concept and action was WAY better than the previous on. I know I may have wrote a negative review on the last one, but this one is definatly better. I watched it until the end, and the only thing that bothered me was the "one eye" thing, however I doubt it was mean't to be emo. Good job.

An Ace Stuffed Soundly Down the Hole

I remember watching the first of this series not too long ago, and most of the details.This one, though, is an ace stuffed soundly down the hole, with a few minor breaks and bends.

The graphics are good, better than most though not perfect, and not to hard to pull off. I thought your voice actors were good, but it's very rare that you get perfection- the guy who played your Assassin Cross , though, was goddamn amazing. Everyone else's acting sounded a little forced, but you take what you get and don't ask for more, right?

I found the joke about the priest cliche, and unoriginal, though this is an Anime in essence, so I can't say it was unexpected. You didn't put enough emphasis towards the joke to make it matter, though, so it seemed an after thought. The afterthought thing seemed to stick with your flash, too, because the sound effects weren't loud enough in the fight scene. I couldn't feel the hits, and so it made the fight a little less enthusiastic and far out.

Your story line seems just like any other action/adventure out there, with the great potential thing and how the assassins were just 'testing' them, and whenever they say that the main characters shrug off the brutal attack on their lives and follow the assassin like lambs to slaughter.

Overall, I liked it, but mostly for the action scene. The story is iffy, and the graphics are good. A few improvements here and some tweaks there, and you, sir, are a winner.