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Just a short film, nothing too exciting. (voice actor btw)
Your artwork and animation were very well done. Also I enjoyed the story you told. However, your skills of combining the music and voice was a little off. Now then the flash was very good, but it was way too short... if you don't mind could you please finish it?
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*Voice Acting and Music Not Balanced
Your voice was a little too loud, the music should have quietened as you began to talk. It should have been longer! That's basically it.
Now for the good parts.
The graphics were pretty decent, got the job done. The choice of music was superb, very emotional and stirring. The story was great as well. It's kind of scary in that it could happen, apart from the deflecting bit I guess.Your voicing was very good as well, serious and neutral.
I hope you'll continue with the story you've sort of started It could be very interesting.
You're nice in this review. Hah, thank you for it.
if it was a bit longer and had a longer storyline I would like much more. it was pretty good though. U promised a response!!!!!I WANT MY RESPONSE!!!!WHERE IS IT!!! I WANT IT NOW!!! I STILL DONT SEE A RESPONSE...fine... be that way
This shall be your response. I'm good with what I say ;)
Nice animation & art, but a bit short.
The best part was the picture of the bubbles, whoever made them non transparent must be god or something.
Hahahaha. Yea, that guy must have been the best ever, I wonder who he must have been.
good one but you shouldnt speak, just let it go with music
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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