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Just a short film, nothing too exciting. (voice actor btw)
Your artwork and animation were very well done. Also I enjoyed the story you told. However, your skills of combining the music and voice was a little off. Now then the flash was very good, but it was way too short... if you don't mind could you please finish it?
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*Voice Acting and Music Not Balanced
Well...you shouldnt have had the tlking . You should have just had subtitles. Good job though.
You gave this submission a vote of "5"
It was awesome. Well you could do a lot more I'm sure, obviously as long as you want to do more. But it was nice. The music (SOAD right?) was nicely chosen and your voice is hot.
Thankz youz Gagsy. <3
You got a lot of work cut out, it was alright like you said 'satisfactory'. Maybe need to improve your graphics, decrease volume of some stuff, if i could work on it, would be great. Well done.
Bah. Like to see you do some better things. >_>
Decent, Has a bit of racism in it.
The graphics aren't very decent for starters, could use a wee bit of improvement if you ask me. The animation was good and was aesthetically pleasing. The musical selections were decent too. Overall, this earns a 5/5 and a 8/10.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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