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i thaught i'd make this hmm its shprt with no colour thats the point maybe ill make a 2 or make one with colour dont be harsh please
Spend more time.
The top movies in the portal all took way over 2 hours. Try 2 weeks at the very least. Some advice is to learn how to manage your layers. It's good that you're able to tween and make a walk cycle (which could use lots of improvement) but there's much more to great Flash movies than those two factors.
All you need to do is spend more time using the program. Resist the temptation to submit every piece of work that took longer than 10 minutes.
Even if this is just a short it still needs more time put into it. The animation could be smoother and you could try putting a bit more effort. If it was made smoother and had time put into it it could be a good piece.
Needs To improve A LOT
First, When you make Such as These Movies try making them Smoother, so they wont look Just like a Simple Drawing, And take your time On Your Animations, Usually the Longer it Takes you, The Better the Animations Will be (Usually)
nothing to specal but... it is nice
needs to run a bit more smoothly
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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