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REQUIRES FLASH PLAYER 8 AND UP TO WORK PROPERLY!!!
it was ok
ok... why has the bloke got a gun but it was ok pls respond
Its about Columbine.
Read the authors comments within the film.
Look it up.
I hate to say this, but it lacks any kind of innovations or creativity, and just appears to recycle old material in an unfunny way. If you had used the content in a slightly different way then maybe it would have some merit, but the poor application of any subtlety means it's not a very good flash at all
Not so much with that one...
We all know about how 12 people died that day, hence the title. And how the two boys did these terrible things. It just feels like even if you were there, this is the wrong way to make your "tribute" or to express this, or that anyone even should. Find a better way to express your emotions about things in another way. You have good potential, but try using it in a different aspect of the word "creative".
I didn't like the content.
My opinion probably won't be a popular one, but it seemed this flash was glorifying the shooters.
I think the "dazed guy" throughout the animation was supposed to relate how shocking the event was, but it wasn't very effective.
There was a focus on bloody bodies and the shooters calmly firing their weapons. The only image where you might relate to the victims is with the injured girl. But she stays expressionless, with no indication of pain, anguish, or even fear when the shooter calmly approaches and points his weapon at her head.
Like I said, I think this flash does more to glorify the shooters.
Suggestions for improvement:
Show scenes of fear. Running, screaming, cowering under desks.
Show more emotion in the shooters... Anger, fear, glee... Anything would probably be better than the matter-of-fact, just-another-day manner they seem to be presented with here.
And it might be better if "dazed guy" showed more emotion near the end.
I'm glad to know that there is someone that cares this much about the 12 people that lost their lives to unknown reasons of two troubled people. I hope there are more people out there like you. But of course this forum is on animations and so on and you lost the 2 points for the lack of artwork. Just not that great. But otherwise, i loved it.
And BTW, is the guy below me retarded? Why does he write like that? o.O
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