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Mar 15, 2008 | 12:46 PM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place March 16, 2008

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Chapter 16 is where chapter 11 left off with the battle at King Kanos kingdom. Hidding out at a village that is populated with no warriors but scholars , and poets The King thinks he is safe till the same Dinosaurs that destroyed their kingdom has caught up with them.

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DAwuvsAKDAwuvsAK

Rated 5 / 5 stars April 16, 2008

AWESOME!

Great storyline and well just to make this short...Seemed so professional to me. Keep it up!

*DA*


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ZoljixZoljix

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 3, 2008

Awsome!

I love the plot of the Primal wars.. Its cool.. Great job RickMarin


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860614860614

Rated 5 / 5 stars April 1, 2008

AMAZING

I Just finished watching all of the series and the only thing I have to say is good job and keep up the good work!


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WhiteRainWhiteRain

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars March 25, 2008

WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????????

For some reason I questioned my liking of it but its still good and interesting



Gate-keeper-girlGate-keeper-girl

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 25, 2008

A few flaws, but otherwise very good.

Sorry I'm not a big fan of these, but they've improved over the episodes.
I was especially impressed with the last minute or so of animation.
Work on walking loops, I noticed a little "stuttering" (I've had that problem more times than I can count)

You have a good style, but I've noticed, that the quality of the character drawing greatly affects it's range of movement. (Better drawn beasts/dinosaurs usually move less)
It's all about adapting a style for animaiton, while keeping true to your drawings.
The women usually fall into the same poses, learn to draw more angles, and this could be fixed.

The backgrounds and environments were more interesting to me than the characters, but that's my view.
Still, not saying you should stop doing what you're doing, but you should challenge yourself. Try new ways of presenting your stories, and push your boundaries (I would like to see more fight scenes, like in the older episodes, because those were very well animated)

Good luck!

-GKG