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This is my first flash, and i think you can see it gets better as it goes along.
I did this in my spare time mostly.
Sorry about the fact that:
Lots of wasted space
Its not in colour
It uses a cut from a song
Its kind of short
Constructive Criticism is much appreciated ^_^
You used my music sooo 5 stars :D
Lol, it was a great tune, just the sort of thing i was hoping for.
Congrats, because this was a really good effort for a first flash attempt!!!
I am impressed. =)
I thought the little guy was very loveable, like Galaxian said.
It was a short clip, but that doesn't matter because it held my attention and even got my head bopping. =)
Good job, and good luck with future flash! =D
Thanks very much :D. Im glad you enjoyed it.
The white space just kept me trained on the character who, although roughly drawn, had personality. He was likable.
Too many "Start" buttons. (Maybe this bothered me because I watched it more than once?)
Overall, I liked it.
Thanks very much, originally i hadnt planned to upload it to newgrounds, but when i did i thought it would be better with the preloader than without which is why that is there along with the other 2.
your first flash?! you obviously know your motion tweens, and layers, and stuf, so kudos to u for being caught up so fast =) I liked it.
Thanks very muchly :D
not bad actually
just make him do a lot more stuff (something stupidly funny like him suddenly riding a star through space during a music solo or something) but yea, overall not bad.
If i ever make a second one, i will put a star riding scene in :D
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