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SetsunaVSHeavyarms

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My third movie i wouls appreciate it if when you write a review where you say its bad could you also give me some tips and links for special effects and sprites THX:):):);):>:>:>:P

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Nu is het tijd voor het echte werk >:)

Het is erg kort, en ik snap het verhaal niet echt. Maar je had ook nog niet echt zo'n ervaring waarschijnlijk. Maarja, nu op deze opleiding, moet het wel gaan lukken, toch? :P
Bedankt voor het gerbuik van mijn nummer btw.

HALLO!

You can do better than that man:P nice job on the effects tho

What Belgoth said.

Should of made the action a little bit more fast paced, and maybe had them both attacking at the same time.

And then of course there is the text bubbles.

TheartistArtist responds:

imworkingatit :)

Boring, sluggish, etc.

As everyone else said, the text bubbles moved to fast, and you should get them to blend in a bit more. They stood out too much.
Seemed kind of slow, or sluggish, too.
Try adding more fight scenes, and maybe more than just little explosions.

TheartistArtist responds:

ok dude i know if you say this shit could you also please give me some tips on where to find explosions fire and smoke and also other special effects thx aprecciate it :)

Pretty Good

The only annoying thing about it is that the speech bubbles disappear quite quickly so its hard to read them. Other then that it was pretty good.

TheartistArtist responds:

i will do something about it ;)

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Mar 13, 2008
3:41 AM EDT