Score: 8
"Good.."
date: July 6, 2008
Very good. Though improvement is needed on a few parts.
The voices seemed out of place or like they were uncomfortable. (The old guy with the 12 year old voice.) You should work on your voices, like putting more feeling into it and whatnot, and giving parts to people who can do it the best.
Animation was good, though the characters seemed a bit stiff, like only one or two body parts were moving. Like the arms were only moving while they were skiing, while the legs, which should have been bended, looked like a wooden board.
There wasn't much music in the flash, which is a bad thing. Usually, there should be a background song playing which is loud enough to hear but not too loud so you can't hear the voices clearly.
Anything I missed.. someone else might get. Hope that helps you guys out some. =D
July 27, 2008
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, i agree with a lot of what you said.
For the voices; ya, we're not doing a very good job on the more adult characters, so we'll need to ask some others for help in the next one with older voices.
Character animation will definately be greatly improved in TM3, etc, we've already improved a great deal.
As for music, we'll try to cram in as much as we can without it getting weird or anything.
Thanks again,
-Mike
