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This animation is about 6 guys, in real life they're my classmates. It's my first movie on newgrounds so I want to hear your critic to make next movie better.
Hope you like it.
Not bad at all.
Pretty good for a first flash in my opinion. The pauses between the action were too long and the story was kinda lacking. Other than that you're off too a good start.
Not bad at all in fact! You've done a good job on your first flash. You should do more stick figures and eventually you'll get better. I'm always on the look out for the next artist to replace Zhu and you could be that one.
very good for your first go but it would be better if there was anouthr buy with powers as well as scorpio so they cud have like a one on one power battle. but anyway it was good and just keep trying. :P
Hey, it's always nice to see another Czech artist, tak pozdravuj tam u vas :-) The animation was awesome. I don't think I can judge that. My advice is to add some storyline or at least introduction to the situation. If you use your great animating skills with a decent storytelling and add some surroundings, you're going to be on the front page in no time :-) Good job and keep it up!
Pretty damn good for a first movie.
Great animation, storyline etc. The one part I think needed fixing was when it showed Scorpion (i think) from the front with the fireballs in his hands, and his legs had completely different shading due to the fireball's glow. Fix that and it would be even more awesome.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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