Not bad, not bad.
The images are good, and its funny. The only complaint I have is that the lip-syncing was off. Good flash, though.
Author Comments
Hi guys, this is my very first flash short and hopefully I'll be making more in the future. With that said, this is my first submission to Newgrounds as well, after alllll these years =]
I forgot to mention the names in the video. The big guy is Gorlock and the puny guy is Loogy. For some reason in .swf format, Gorlocks head starts to flash in the middle. But when I exported to quicktime it doesnt.
And yes I know my voice acting sucks, but its the best I can do since I worked on this alone. Then again Im not an animator to be a good voice actor anyways.
Honus-1117 responds:
Yea its wierd in swf. the lip syncing is off. Maybe I'll watch it again, cause I knew somethign wasn't right, maybe theres a way I can "adjust it" persay
good
this flash is really funny and its one that made me laugh out loud. the graphics are great but it should be longer.
You make me sick!
Luls.
I liked it!
I didn't think it was too short. It had everything it needed for buildup, joke, punchline... Try to fill in more and it might not be as funny.
The animation was good and the sound wasn't bad.
I wouldn't mind seeing a series of these.
Very nice !!
Nice animation, very well created,and very funny !