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Atention: There is a bug or something happening to my computer. Please use your imagination
Still not that good, but better.
You are getting quite a bit better. Now here's the review.
+ Framerate was increased. Love that.
+ Better Animation than #6.
+ As much as I like randomosity, I love a good storyline. This one isn't that great, however, but it's okay.
- That annoying border thing on a colored background continues. ARGH. Try to fix that, PLEASE.
- Didn't like the song too much, but that's a very small complaint.
- Although better animation, still not too good. But you are improving. See what comes with a little practice?
- Too short. And leaves at a VERY vague cliffhanger. Are you going to discontinue this story when you create #8? Or are you actually gonna finish this one?
- Storyline wasn't that great.
Overall: Not that great, but better. You're either practicing, or you're just getting better over flashes and time. Either which makes me happy.
Oh, and an apology for all the douchebaggery I gave you when I first started watching your flash. I'd apologize via PM, but you've blocked me, so...
Thank you Hybird63. I am going to finish this flash story off but probably at EP9. Ep 8 will be something else. The annoying white backgrounds can not be fixed sadly because even the Alpha channel doesn't work on Lswif. Half The music was in Vietnamese and it was ridiculouse I had to admit. I am surprised about the length comment because it was the same length as ep. 5. Yeah the story wasn't great. Oh and thank you for the apology. Everybody has done bad atleast once in there life or something. I have done bad too.
I have a question though-Did you use Liveswif?
Why yes, I do.
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