Score: 6

"Random! ...with potential."

by: SeethingSwarm

date: May 13, 2008

The only things I REALLY liked were the axe and the rotating head. I dont know if you should rather have kept this one for yourself than to put it here on Newgrounds. Its much more of a practice than an actual project, but you do have some skills that will hopefully just improve with time. Im hoping to see some cool short movie with a plot and some awesome perspective animation from you!

I see this one guy asked you how long it took, and his options started form 10 mins. Damn. If you can do this in one hour you are still amazing, but I guess it took even longer than that...

Score: 7

"hmm good?"

by: Miren2k

date: April 30, 2008

well.. there was no real ... point.. in the animation.. had no meaning what so ever, but I don't think you intended there to be anyway. So I won't vote on that.

However the art work was impressive - the 3d rotating head was the best part of the flash, it shows some good art work skills, I reckon if you put a lot of time and effort in - you could make a really good short movie, you just need to have a little more creativity and maturity within the animation. By maturity I mean the ideas within this flash seem like the creation of a 12 year old; no offense to your skill, just to your ideas =P but things like that only come in time. Like the others said work on your sound, and try not to use automated sound, record it yourself or let some friends record the sound or other voice actors on newgrounds.

Apart from that, I am slightly looking forward to seeing a more developed piece by you (hopefully an actual movie. short movie. or anything worth watching rather then some totally random experiment)

Welldone, the main thing I want to see in your next work is some moving perspective animating, basically like 3d stuff! it would be good

Score: 8

"um.........nice"

by: tecneoslayer

date: April 26, 2008

The frames are nice but not that nice.And like people say you could make it into a proper flash movie.

But I have a quastion

about how long did
it take to make this???

10 minutes=pretty good
5 min= whoa
1 minute= ur awesome
less than a second= ur god himself.

Score: 8

"Very nice for your first work!"

by: Sonni

date: April 22, 2008

The drawings are good and not to mention the frame by frame animation is done nicely. Like everyone said, you could turn this into a proper flash movie.

But I think you could adjust the sound quality a bit. What are the kbps of the mp3 files when you publish this flash? Usually if you put it at 128kbps it sounds still close to the original quality but in exchange for that you file size increases. You might want to jack it up to 64kbps though.

Score: 9

"nice work"

by: TheThingy5

date: April 21, 2008

awesome fbf, especially the rotating extras, though now you must make an atmospherical story with lots of different perspectives, i'm sure you could pull it off ;)