Great effort

The voice over was great but this flash needs improvements in graphics and better jokes. It would be great if this had a real story.

Nice try

we all have to start somewhere
and it was better than anything i could ever come up with :P
Had some funny parts but
like slug said no real concept
try making the bodies lean a bit when the hands move cuz that looked a bit weird too but nice attempt :)
lol @ Karate man :D

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needs a bit of improvment

not good

it had no real concept but 2 for trying