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http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/535114 check that link for the latest and most funny one of the series
hard to say
hmm well I can see the humor in it and unfortunatly its not the kind of humor that i like but thinking in the sense of the kind of person that does like it, it does seem kinda funny. The quality of the drawings seems to be nice for this kinda presentation cause I think very good quality would kinda ruin the effect. The voices varied, some being good some not so good but over all pulled through. I suggest reviewing other submissions as to improove a bit
It's the wrong kind of funny... it just doesn't appeal to me. You could make it funny without sex and violence if you wanted to.
SORRY IT DOESNT APEAL TO YOU, THANKS FOR THE REVIEW AND THE 6
If you're doing a hentai flash, you should work on your drawing skills. The story isn't great, but who needs a good story when it's supposed to be porn?
Positives: some images loops in there were quite decent, your style is more suited for parodies for now
Negatives: sound was bad - sorry you would need better voice actors, most drawings were sketchy - I know how it's hard to draw on flash without a tablet, so consider getting one if you're going to take this work seriously.
As for a personal appreciation, I did not like it too much, especially because I've seen too much Newgrounds flashes with c**ks in them and that just ain't funny anymore, if it ever was. However, you did work on this flash and that time invested shows you at the very least tried.
yep i did try xD thanks
well its good but it could use a little voice acting and have a better story line other than that i think you did a good job ;)
I GET YOUR POINT THANKS FOR SAYING I DID A GOOD JOB
some major flaws...
there was great voice acting but it was a little too low, i would say double the volume... the artwork was great but better animation is to be desired.
at least you liked the voice acting ty
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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